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Chapter 3 - The Proposal

**Scene 1: The Storm Breaks** *(Location: Outside Maryam's Home – Late Evening, Monsoon Season)* 

The sky had been threatening rain all day, the air thick with the scent of wet earth. Haroon stood under the awning of a closed tailor's shop, his uniform clinging to him in the humidity. He had rehearsed the words a hundred times, but now they tangled in his throat like kite strings in a tree. 

Maryam's house was a modest two-story structure with a blue door, the paint peeling at the edges. A single lamp glowed in the upstairs window—her room. 

Lightning split the sky. Then the rain came—not a drizzle, but a torrent, as if the heavens had overturned a bucket. 

Haroon stepped into the downpour. 

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**Scene 2: The Confession** *(Location: Maryam's Courtyard – Soaked and Shivering)* 

He knocked on the blue door, his knuckles raw from the cold. No answer. 

*"Maryam!"* His voice was swallowed by the thunder. 

A shadow moved behind the upstairs window. Then, the creak of a latch. Maryam leaned out, her hair loose for once, cascading over her shoulders. 

*"Pagal ho gaye ho?"* she shouted over the rain. *Have you gone mad?* 

Haroon wiped water from his eyes. *"Haan! Tumhare liye!"* *Yes! For you!* 

Maryam stared. Then she disappeared. 

A moment later, the door cracked open. She held a faded umbrella, her bare feet peeking beneath the hem of her nightclothes. *"Andar aao,"* she said. *Come inside.* 

*"Nahi."* Haroon stood his ground. *"Pehle suno."* *No. Listen first.* 

The rain drummed on the umbrella as Maryam stepped fully outside, her toes curling against the wet stone. 

Haroon took a breath. *"Main tumse pyar karta hoon."* *I love you.* 

Silence. Even the rain seemed to pause. 

Maryam's lips twitched. Then she laughed—not mocking, but startled, breathless. *"Itni baarish mein? Yeh sab?"* *In all this rain? This is how you do it?* 

Haroon's ears burned. *"Tumhari kitaabon ki tarah… shayad kuch scenes dramatic hone chahiye."* *Like your books… some scenes should be dramatic.* 

Maryam shook her head, but her eyes were bright. She reached out, her fingers brushing his sopping sleeve. *"Tumhare kapde barbaad ho gaye."* *Your clothes are ruined.* 

*"Koi baat nahi."* Haroon caught her hand. *"Jawab do."* *No matter. Give me an answer.* 

Maryam looked at their joined hands. Then, quick as a sparrow, she leaned in and pressed her lips to his cheek. 

Before Haroon could react, she pulled back. *"Ab jaao,"* she said, turning toward the door. *Now go.* 

*"Maryam—"* 

*"Mere Baba se baat karo,"* she called over her shoulder, vanishing inside. *Talk to my father.* 

The blue door clicked shut. 

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**Scene 3: The Father's Test** *(Location: Al-Rahman Bookbinders – Next Morning)* 

Old Rahman didn't look up from his ledger when Haroon entered. *"Uniform pehen ke aaye ho? Dhamki deni hai?"* *You came in uniform? To threaten me?* 

Haroon swallowed. *"Nahi, sahab. Izzat se puchna tha."* *No, sir. I came to ask respectfully.* 

Rahman's pen scratched across the page. *"Meri beti ko tumhare saath kya kaam?"* *What business does my daughter have with you?* 

*"Main use apni zindagi mein khush rakh sakta hoon."* *I can keep her happy in my life.* 

*"Khush?"* Rahman finally met his eyes. *"Ek policewala? Jo roz khoon dekhega? Jo kabhi ghar nahi hoga?"* *Happy? A policeman? Who'll see blood every day? Who'll never be home?* 

Haroon clenched his fists. *"Main wada karta hoon—"* 

*"Wada?"* Rahman stood, his voice low. *"Mera bhai bhi police ke haath se mara. Usey galat ilzaam laga ke."* *My brother was killed by the police. Wrongly accused.* 

The shop's clock ticked. Somewhere outside, a bicycle bell rang. 

Haroon took off his cap. *"Sahab, agar main aapke bhai ka qatil hota, toh aaj yahan khada nahi hota."* *Sir, if I were your brother's killer, I wouldn't be standing here today.* 

Rahman studied him. Then he walked to the back shelf and pulled out a ledger—thick, bound in cracked leather. *"Yeh dekho."* *Look at this.* 

Haroon opened it. Page after page of names, dates, amounts owed. 

*"Yeh sab log hain jo humse qarz leke bhag gaye,"* Rahman said. *These are people who took loans and ran.* *"Inme se ek ko dhund ke lao. Uska qarz chuka do. Tab main sochunga."* *Find one of them. Repay their debt. Then I'll consider.* 

Haroon traced a name at random: *Feroze Ali, 5000 rupees.* 

*"Achha,"* he said, snapping the book shut. *"Ek hafta."* *One week.* 

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**Scene 4: The Hunt** *(Location: Lahore's Back Alleys – Over the Next Six Days)* 

Feroze Ali was a ghost. 

The address in the ledger led to a boarded-up butcher shop. Neighbors muttered about a gambling habit, a wife who'd left him. Haroon checked police records—two arrests for petty theft, but no recent sightings. 

On the sixth evening, as Haroon sat nursing a bruised knuckle (courtesy of a false lead in a brothel), Rahim—the pickpocket from Chapter 1—slid onto the stool beside him. 

*"Sahab, aap kisi ko dhoond rahe hain?"* *Sir, you looking for someone?* 

Haroon eyed him. *"Tujhe pata hai?"* *You know?* 

Rahim grinned, tapping his temple. *"Bazaar ki sab khabar yahan hai. Par…"* He rubbed his fingers together. 

Haroon slapped a 500-rupee note on the counter. *"Bata."* *Tell me.* 

*"Feroze bhai kal subah Muridke ja rahe hain. Bus se."* *Feroze is leaving for Muridke tomorrow by bus.* 

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**Scene 5: The Debt Paid** *(Location: Lahore Bus Terminal – Dawn)* 

Feroze was a gaunt man with nicotine-stained fingers, clutching a tattered suitcase. 

Haroon blocked his path. *"Feroze Ali?"* 

The man paled. *"Main kuch galat nahi kiya—"* *I didn't do anything—* 

*"Rahman sahab ka qarz chukana hai."* *You need to repay Rahman.* 

Feroze's shoulders slumped. *"Mere paas paise nahi hain."* *I don't have the money.* 

Haroon pulled an envelope from his pocket—his entire savings. *"Yeh lo. 5000. Par ek shart hai."* *Here. 5000. But on one condition.* 

*"Kya?"* 

*"Kabhi Muridke mat jao."* *Never go to Muridke.* 

Feroze stared at the money, then at Haroon's face. Slowly, he took the envelope and walked away, leaving the suitcase behind. 

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**Scene 6: The Answer** *(Location: Al-Rahman Bookbinders – Evening)* 

Haroon placed the ledger on Rahman's desk. *"Feroze ka qarz chuka diya."* *Feroze's debt is repaid.* 

Rahman flipped to the page. A fresh red stamp marked it *PAID*. He exhaled. *"Tumhare paise?"* *Your own money?* 

*"Haan."* 

The old man closed the book. *"Maryam ne kaha tha tum pagal ho."* *Maryam said you were crazy.* 

Haroon's heart pounded. *"Aur aapka faisla?"* *And your decision?* 

Rahman stood, walked to the window where Maryam's shadow lingered behind the curtain. *"Kal subah 10 baje, molvi sahab aayenge."* *Tomorrow at 10 AM, the cleric will come.* 

Haroon's knees nearly buckled. 

As he turned to leave, Rahman added, *"Aur haan… uniform mat pehenna."* *And don't wear the uniform.* 

Maryam's laughter floated from the back room. 

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