Location: Wrecked Highway, Near Varnak Core
Scene 1: The Anti-Hero Awakens
Sim Hoyun stands amidst ruins, the twisted skeleton of a once-bustling highway. The heat warps the air, but he remains unshaken — eyes cold as steel, soul burning hotter than the fire around him.
SIM HOYUN (muttering): "Come on... show me something worth breaking."
The ground is a graveyard of ash and broken dreams. Flames twist into clawed hands around him, but he doesn't move.
Suddenly— The wind stops. A pulse rumbles beneath the concrete.
THOOM. THOOM.
A monster steps through the wall of fire —
The Cloak Monster — its presence swallowing light, warping the sky behind it.
It stops, towering over Sim. Then it crouches, shrinking down, eye to eye. A mockery of balance. A silent threat.
Sim's hand moves to the leather strap over his shoulder. The hammer glints — heavy, scarred, waiting.
FLASHBACK – Black and white, flickering edges – Sim's memory.
A small house. A younger Sim. His mother's warm hands pressing the hammer into his palms.
MOTHER (softly): "The world will try to break you. But this hammer — it won't. Because your will... won't either."
Back to Present.
Sim rolls his shoulders. Calm. Centered.
Scene 2: Fire vs Fury
Location: Ground Zero – Outer Wall of Varnak Core
The Cloak Monster's minions scatter, sensing the shift. Their master is here. And across from him — the challenger.
Sim Hoyun.
A silent war begins in their eyes.
CLOAK MONSTER (growling): "You smell like defiance."
Sim's lips curl. His voice is cold, calculated.
SIM HOYUN: "And you reek of failure."
The attack begins.
The Cloak Monster throws out a hand — a tidal wave of flames rushes forward, consuming the world in a blinding inferno.
Sim doesn't run.
He spins the hammer — once.
BOOM!
The ground cracks. A shockwave bursts outward, scattering flames like leaves in a storm.
The fire meets Sim's fury — and splinters apart.
He steps forward, eyes locked on the monster.
SIM HOYUN (English): "You're not fire. You're smoke pretending to matter."
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Scene 2 Continued: Fire vs Fury
Sim stands untouched. The flames flicker around him, but they dare not touch his resolve.
SIM (inner monologue):
> "My hammer's name… is Vektus. Born from pain and fury — and only pain can break it."
He charges.
The earth trembles under each step. His hammer swings —
CRACK!
It slams into the Cloak Monster's leg, sending out a shockwave. The monster stumbles, just slightly — but it feels it.
The retaliation is immediate.
The monster conjures Hellfire into its claw — glowing molten red — and swings at Sim.
Sim ducks — but a flame catches his shoulder, burning through cloth and flesh.
No scream.
SIM (calmly):
> "So your fire burns? Let's see what my hammer can break."
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Scene 3: Hammer Revelation
Location: Battlefield – 3:34 AM
Vektus begins to glow.
Red and blue energy twist around it like a storm dancing on steel.
Within the core — something stirs.
The Hellbreaker Core awakens — a forbidden relic, only triggered when the bearer embraces death as a possibility.
Sim exhales slowly. He accepts it.
Suddenly —
A lightning surge bursts from his chest. Energy wraps around his arms, his back, his eyes. The hammer grows heavier — divine, alive.
He roars —
A sound that echoes through metal, sky, and memory.
SIM:
"VEKTUS!"
He spins once. Then—
THRAAAAAAMMMMMM!!!
The hammer collides with the Cloak Monster's chest.
An explosive shockwave ripples out — tearing through flesh, fire, and darkness. The monster flies back, crashing into the wall of the outer core.
Smoke. Silence. Power.
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Nearby – Shadowed Cliff Edge
Two unknown figures watch from the rocks, barely lit by the moon.
Unknown Figure #1 (whispering):
"Whoa… is this a movie or real life?"
Unknown Figure #2 (grinning):
"Shut up and watch. It's review time."
Unknown Figure #1:
"Man… I salute his sister — that hammer strike was insane!"
They both stare, wide-eyed, as the smoke begins to clear…
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Scene 4: Aftershock Silence
A dead silence.
The explosion has passed, but its echo lingers in the shattered earth and the burning sky.
Dust hangs in the air like fog.
The Cloak Monster lies motionless — half-buried in cracked concrete, surrounded by a halo of broken fire.
Sim Hoyun stands firm, breathing hard. His grip on Vektus tightens — the once-blazing hammer now pulses faintly with red and blue veins of fading energy.
SIM (inner monologue):
> "That… was my full-force strike. He's down — but… something's still not right."
He steps forward, cautious. His boots crunch over debris. Every instinct warns him: This isn't over.
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Scene 5: The Eye That Sees All
Then — a hum.
Faint. Eerie. Growing sharper like a tuning fork vibrating in the soul.
The monster twitches. Its chest glows once more.
And then —
WHUMMMM!
A single eye opens in its forehead —
Golden. Ancient. Glyphs spin around the iris like clockwork symbols of forgotten gods.
Sim freezes.
His breath catches.
SIM (inner monologue):
> "What is that eye…? It wasn't active before. Was that… just its first phase?"
The air drops cold — then erupts into molten heat.
A golden flamestorm explodes around the Cloak Monster, forming a cyclone. The wind spirals unnaturally — like gravity itself is bending.
Then — it speaks.
CLOAK MONSTER (voice layered, thousands in one):
> "You thought this was the end, Sim Hoyun?
This… is only the beginning."
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Scene 6: Instant Death Speed
BOOM — GONE.
The monster vanishes. Not teleports. Not runs. Just — gone.
No sound. No blur.
Sim's eyes widen.
SIM (internal):
> "No sound… no trail… can I even see him now?"
Then—
WHOOSH!
The monster appears instantly — right in front of Sim's face.
One hand burning gold like a serpent, coiled to strike.
The other hand — grabs Sim by the jaw.
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Nearby — the cliff
Unknown Figure #1 (grinning):
> "Now this… is getting fun."
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Scene 7: The Slam That Shatters Worlds
Cloak Monster (calm, but terrifying):
> "Look into my eye… there is no fear in yours — but no surrender either. That… is your mistake."
Sim tries to raise his hammer — but it's too late.
WHAMMMM!!!
The monster slams Sim into the earth with godlike force.
The ground fractures. The city shatters.
Buildings collapse into clouds of ash.
Roadways crumple like paper.
A wave of raw destruction spreads outward — a cataclysm of fire, wind, debris, and golden energy.
BOOOOOMMMMMM!!!
Vektus, still in Sim's hand, absorbs most of the golden flame —
It glows. It trembles. Then—
CRACK!!!
A glowing fracture slices down its center.
Sim (internal scream, but outward silence):
> "No… Mom said… it could never break…"
The flames crawl over his armor like venom —
His body cracks. His bones scream.
But his eyes… don't blink.
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Scene 8: Within the Fire – Mindscape Drift
Suddenly — Sim is falling.
A drifting freefall through darkness… then—
Black and white. A memory. A stormy night.
His mother stands in the rain, holding the hammer.
Mother:
> "This weapon's true strength awakens only when you've lost everything…
When the only thing left standing — is your will."
Young Sim (crying):
> "But what if I lose, Mom…?"
Mother (smiling softly):
> "Then learn to rise. Every time. Every place. No matter what."
The hammer in her hands glows —
Red and blue, just like now.
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Scene 9: Humanity's Hope is Coming
Back in the real world —
Sim's body lies broken, half-buried in molten debris and shattered steel.
The Cloak Monster steps back, brushing dust from its hands. Its cloak flutters in a wind that doesn't exist.
He murmurs:
Cloak Monster:
> "When even a man's will turns to ash… what remains of him?"
Then — a twitch.
Sim's hand moves.
He opens his eyes. Blood dripping. Bones trembling.
But he rises.
Shaking. Silent. Alive.
Sim (barely audible):
> "I'm… still alive."
Unknown Figure #2 (groaning):
> "Bro, can we hit pause now?"
Unknown Figure #1 (mouth wide):
> "He's DONE, man. Toast. Call the funeral!"
And then —
The Cloak Monster's eye glows again.
A new symbol etches itself into the golden iris:
Destruction.
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TO BE CONTINUED
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