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Chapter 4 - The Fifth Sin

Kael stirred long before the sun breached the horizon.

He lay awake, staring at the cracked ceiling above his cot, watching the shadows shift with each breath. The monastery was silent. Even the mice that skittered between the walls seemed to hold their breath.

A stillness so deep it hummed.

It wasn't a dream that had woken him, but a presence—one that pulsed from his Core and stirred in his chest like a second heartbeat. The system had grown… aware. Not just passive, but watchful. Ever since he'd corrupted Emil, the connection had strengthened.

The events of the last two days hadn't faded from his mind. Emil's collapse. The corrupted shrine. The fractured candlelight. Every act had been deliberate, calculated.

And each one brought the same reward.

Power.

The parchment Emil carried—his sigil—had ignited a chain reaction. Not only had it caused the divine ritual to backfire, but it had also marked Kael's first true manipulation of another's faith.

He hadn't expected how powerful the reward would feel.

Nor how empty.

[System Log – Resonance Milestone Reached]

You have committed five distinct transgressions against divine law.

Designation Unlocked: "Herald of Collapse" (hidden title)

Effect: Your actions echo more loudly across sacred networks. You will attract resistance sooner.

Bonus Unlocked: Passive Corruption Spread increased by 5%.

Kael understood something vital—something no scripture had ever said aloud:

The system he followed didn't just reward opposition to divine order.

 It fed on the destruction of meaning.

If the divine system was built on hope, Kael's was built on its failure.

He swung his legs over the edge of his cot, planting bare feet on the cold stone. His room was darker than usual, even with the moonlight streaming in.

Or perhaps it only seemed darker now.

He stood. Dressed slowly. Deliberately.

Today, he wouldn't just chip away at it.

He would strike something central.

That opportunity came sooner than expected.

Just after morning prayers, the abbot announced that a pilgrimage was to begin. The monastery's most sacred relics were to be taken to the Shrine of Stillness, a secluded altar nestled in the foothills of the Weeping Hills.

It was an annual tradition. One meant to reaffirm their place in the Lightmother's favor.

Among the relics was the Everflame Candle, a symbolic artifact said to burn with the breath of the divine once lit by a worthy soul. It had remained unlit for decades.

Kael's Core throbbed as he heard the name.

He had to test his system. Truly. Not in hiding. Not with whispers.

But with open defilement.

This was it.

It was the perfect opportunity.

His fifth sin.

Four monks would escort the relics: Brother Vallon, Brother Gared, young Brother Jace, and Kael himself—volunteering with a quiet word and a bowed head.

None questioned it. After all, he had no official station. No sacred duties. He was just another body—an extra pair of hands willing to carry something that mattered.

Invisible.

The irony made him want to laugh.

The pilgrimage began at midday, beneath a pale sky smeared with thin clouds.

Kael stayed quiet during the first hours of the hike. The shrine lay near the base of the Weeping Hills, about a half-day's march. The weather was clear, the path dry.

The cart holding the relics creaked along the dirt path, its iron-bound wheels cutting into the earth. The Everflame Candle was sealed inside a wooden ark reinforced with divine wards—glowing symbols drawn in blessed ash and oil.

Kael walked beside it, eyes lowered, steps measured. The other monks muttered hymns as they walked, eyes forward.

Midway through, as they reached the ridge above the old ash orchard, Kael feigned a stumble and fell back from the group.

"Brother Kael," Vallon called from ahead. "Is all well?"

Kael nodded, brushing off his robe. "Just a stone. Continue on."

They did.

He waited until they disappeared over the crest.

Then he turned toward the ark.

It sat mounted on the back of a wooden handcart, lashed tightly with iron clasps. The seals were reinforced with divine glyphs—ink made from blessed oil and ash.

The candle was inside. The Everflame. A relic passed down from the Temple of Embers is said to have once burned for thirty days and thirty nights without fuel.

Now, it lay dormant.

Waiting for a righteous hand to light it again.

They reached the halfway point by late afternoon: a clearing by an old ash tree, scorched black by lightning long ago. Here, they would rest. Eat. Pray.

Kael volunteered to keep watch.

The others, grateful for the quiet, left him alone with the relics.

As soon as their footsteps faded, Kael stepped toward the ark.

System Prompt: High-value relic detected.

Desecration will trigger system-wide attention.

Proceed anyway?

He placed a hand on the side of the ark.

"Proceed."

He placed his hand over the glyphs etched into the lid.

[Voidflame] surged silently from his palm. It spread over the ark like oil, seeking the seams between wood and ward.

Then he pressed it against the glyphs.

The glyphs resisted. One flared bright gold, humming with divine intent.

Kael gritted his teeth. Pushed harder. He poured fury into the flame—not from rage, but from conviction.

The blessed seal sizzled. Cracked. Melted.

Kael pushed harder.

[Voidflame] is interacting with the active holy ward...

The ward shattered like glass. A ripple of energy pulsed out from the ark, almost knocking him back.

The seal was broken.

[Ward Break Successful]

Sanctity compromised. Holy defense nullified.

+1 Corruption Resonance (3/10)

The lock fell open.

Inside, nestled in black velvet, rested the Everflame Candle—pale wax, perfect wick, untouched by time.

Kael took it gently in both hands. Raised it to eye level.

And whispered: "Burn."

The [Voidflame] caught.

The candle ignited.

But not with divine fire.

The flame that surged upward was black, licking toward the sky in slow, dancing arcs. It didn't burn the wax. It consumed something else.

Hope. Light. History.

Kael stepped back, chest rising with slow, measured breath.

[Relic Desecrated: Everflame Candle]

Major act of corruption recorded.

+2 Corruption Resonance (5/10)

System Evolution Triggered.

New title unlocked: "Fifth Sin."

Progress toward Tier 2: 1/10

Skill Resonance Triggered...

A second pulse hit him like a wave.

Kael staggered.

His Core pulsed violently—once, twice—then flared outward. He fell to his knees as a wave of energy slammed through him, tearing at every nerve. His breath caught in his throat.

Then the system spoke:

Tier Advancement Achieved: Tier 1 → Tier 2 (Malice-Bound → Catalyst of Undoing)

New Skill Unlocked: [Flicker of Dread]

New Passive Trait: [Echo of Desecration]

Skill Description: Emit a cursed light that suppresses blessings and induces terror in divine-aligned beings within 30 feet.

Passive Effect: Sacred objects decay 25% faster in your presence.

Kael smiled grimly.

It had been worth it.

But before he could reflect, shouting echoed from the path ahead.

Brother Gared stormed into the clearing, face red, fists clenched.

"Where are the others?" Kael asked, voice calm.

"Vallon sent me back. Said the wind changed," Gared said. Then his eyes landed on the open ark. The candle. The black fire.

Kael remained kneeling.

"What have you done?" Gared bellowed. "What madness—!"

Kael stood slowly. Calm.

Kael didn't answer.

Gared stepped forward, trembling. "Do you understand what this is? That fire—it isn't holy. It's cursed. You've ruined everything!"

Jace turned pale.

Gared rushed forward, drawing his censer and swinging it toward Kael. Holy incense spilled into the air.

"By the Light, be cleansed!"

The smoke struck Kael's face—and fizzled.

[Witchmarked] and [Weight of Sin] reduce blessing effectiveness by 40%...

Gared faltered.

Kael didn't hesitate.

He raised his hand.

[Flicker of Dread] bloomed.

A sphere of dim, wrong-colored light formed between them. The incense died in an instant. The censer cracked down the center.

The ground darkened.

Gared fell to his knees, sobbing, unable to breathe.

Kael stepped closer. He didn't need to strike. The system had already done it for him.

"I don't need your forgiveness," he said.

Gared whimpered. "Demon..."

"No," Kael said. "I'm something worse."

Jace screamed and ran.

Kael let him.

He knelt beside Gared, watching the monk writhe.

"I'm not your brother," he said. "Not anymore."

He turned and walked away, leaving the Everflame to burn.

That night, the monastery bells rang four times—an emergency signal not heard in years.

Kael returned through the garden gate alone. He told the guards the others had been attacked by wild beasts. That Brother Gared was alive but unwell. That the Everflame had been destroyed in the chaos.

They didn't believe him entirely.

But they didn't question him, either.

Because when they looked into his eyes, they saw certainty.

And certainty was terrifying.

That night, Kael sat in the empty chapel.

The candles refused to light near him. The altar cloth curled and browned. The statue of the Lightmother cracked down the center.

He didn't flinch.

The system displayed its new interface before him:

System Log:

Name: Kael BlackwellCore: Tier 2 – Catalyst of Undoing

Fuel: Negative Emotional Energy

Path: INFAMY

Active Skills:

[Voidflame] — Corruptive fire that feeds on divinity[Malform Prayer] — Twist divine spell or ritual into its opposite[Flicker of Dread] — Emit aura of fear, suppress blessings, weaken nearby divine entities

Passive Effects:

[Witchmarked] — Weaken nearby sacred artifacts[Desecrator] — Passive resistance to divine detection

[Weight of Sin] — Actions gain resonance when witnessed[Echo of Desecration] — All sacred objects decay faster in proximity

Titles:

Herald of Collapse

Fifth Sin

Malice-Bound

Catalyst of Undoing (Unlocked)

System Message: You have reached the threshold of visibility. The world now shifts to react to your presence.

Tracking protocols by Divine Authority initiated.

Kael's breath hitched.

Kael smiled bitterly.

Let them come.

He was ready.

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