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Bleeding Heart (The lonely bird always sings alone)

Pluma_de_Codru
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Synopsis
Sorin was a simple person arriving in a big city to look for work. Many people said he was too naïve. He didn't believe them, of course he didn't. So why has he been so naïve to enter this place? Why has he been so naïve to not run at the first scream? Why did he stay when he saw the blood? Why didn't he run when he saw him? Standing in that chair, watching him with those dark blue eyes? - - - - These are the only two chapters I wrote. I intend to write the rest, but I am curious to see if others like my writing style, to see if others find my story engaging enough. It is a little test. Unfortunately, to write the entire story will take me a few months, maybe a year, since I don't like to write a chapter and then post it. I prefer to have the entire story finished. I just hope it is interesting enough and if you have some criticism, I am more than happy to hear it.
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Chapter 1 - Before Reading

It has always been my dream to write a book, and this is what I am doing now. 

I am working at a very important story in multiple parts and for that I want to find my writing style and how to write better in English. This is why I will first write two other books before starting on that particular project.

My favorite dynamic is the smaller, cute bottom and the taller top. This will be the dynamic in my bigger book, but in the first two I decided to work with different dynamics, so I hope you'll like these first two books.

Unfortunately, like it was written in the synopsis, I wrote only two chapters for this book. I really wanna know what opinions others have on my writing style and if the story is interesting.

The story will be probably finished in a few months and then I will post it here.

I have twitter where I will post some art and maybe updates about the book (I am not sure about the updates, it is something I want to do but I will actually do it) 

Here are the characters from this book:

Sorin Fântânaru

Age: 20 years old

Birthday: 1 March

Appearance: He has an athletic build. His hair is dark brown and his eyes are green.

Height: 1.81

Likes: He loves the weather after the rain.

Dislikes: He hates the rain.

Corvin ???

Age: ???

Birthday: 3 December

Appearance: Thin body with a pale skin. He has blonde hair and his eyes are blue.

Height: 1.78

Likes: ???

Dislikes: Tomatoes

Sorin: https://x.com/PCodru60133/status/1940591999507484740/photo/1

Corvin: https://x.com/PCodru60133/status/1940591742908313621/photo/1

Both: https://x.com/PCodru60133/status/1940591508539035998/photo/1