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Ashes Beneath Iron Skies

JD_Suthir
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In the industrial wasteland of Dorr Vale, strength isn't inherited—it's torn from the flesh through pain. Kai is nobody. Weak. Quiet. Invisible. He survives on scraps and silence, his only reason for enduring the city's cruelty being his younger sister, Aya—a 16-year-old girl who still believes in school, hope, and the fading idea of a peaceful life. But when Kai is publicly tortured and left to die, something awakens in him—not magic, not rage, but a terrifying clarity. His body begins to evolve under pressure, adapting to pain, suppressing weakness, and moving one brutal step beyond human. In a world where “Awakening” is the last path to power, nations begin sacrificing their own citizens to build super-soldiers. Empires rise behind propaganda. And Aya is next in line to be broken. Now, Kai must claw his way up from the dirt—through back-alley battles, military death pits, and cult-run cities—to save his sister from a fate worse than death. But each Awakening chips away at his humanity. Each enemy he defeats brings him closer to becoming the very monster he fights against. And in the end, the boy who only wanted to protect one person… may become the weapon that breaks the world. “He didn’t scream when they chained him to the wheel. He just stopped breaking.”
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Ash on His Skin

The air in DorrVale always smelled like rust and regret.

Iron dust drifted in lazy swirls through the broken alleys, a metallic haze that never quite settled. It coated rooftops like old grief, gathered in the creases of skin, and lodged deep into the lungs of anyone foolish enough to breathe too deeply. The city creaked beneath its own weight under the pressure of poverty, of silence, of lives traded for survival.

It was a place carved from the bones of a mountain, built on labor and blood, not promises. Nothing here was earned.

Everything was taken, sometimes by hunger, sometimes by force.

At the very edge of the worker quarter, where the buildings leaned like old men too tired to stand straight, a boy crouched in the corner of a narrow alleyway. His arms looped around his knees, his back pressed to a wall that hadn't seen clean stone in a decade.

Kai.

Dust clung to the hollows of his cheeks and the seams of his patched shirt. His hair, once dark, was grayed with ash. His eyes quiet, sunken, too old for his age stared at nothing.

He didn't know how long he'd been there.

Minutes? Hours? It didn't matter.

Time in Dorr Vale didn't move by clocks. It moved by shifts, by bruises, by how many lashes it took before someone stopped screaming. It moved with the tolling of the central guard tower's bells, with the cries from the punishment square, with the number of bodies removed from the mines that week.

Kai had learned early not to count time. Only silence.

The kind of silence that came before a whip cracked.

The kind that meant the guards were watching.

The kind that fell now.

Then came the sound.

A soft crunch, ash underfoot.

Not heavy. Not rushed. Small steps. Careful ones.

He didn't need to look.

Aya.

Her rhythm was familiar. Calm, even, like the rustle of dry leaves. But there was always a quiet urgency in her step... buried, masked, like she feared the ground might listen too closely.

She knelt beside him without a word, the hem of her skirt gathered in one hand to keep it from soaking in the muck that pooled in the alley's crevice. Her shadow fell over him, thin and flickering in the light from a nearby forge chimney.

"You didn't eat again," she said.

Not an accusation. Just a fact.

Kai said nothing. His jaw remained slack, his gaze unmoved.

Aya reached into her satchel and held out a rice bun... split in half. One side had a clear bite taken from it. The other was wrapped in a strip of linen that had been mended at least three times. Her fingers were ink-stained, cracked at the knuckles. She smelled faintly of parchment and coal soot.

Still learning. Still studying. Still believing.

Books. Futures. Dreams.

Ridiculous things in a place like this.

Kai took the bun, but he didn't eat. His stomach no longer begged. Hunger had given up screaming weeks ago. It had learned to wait in silence.

Aya shifted closer, her voice quieter. "Guards are circling early today. Two new ones. They're—looking."

He finally blinked.

"Looking?" he echoed.

She nodded, eyes flicking toward the alley's mouth. "For someone to make an example of. They're in uniform, but not locals. Harsher. Faster with their batons."

That meant him.

Kai knew the drill. Too small. Too thin. Too quiet. He didn't make noise. Didn't push back. Didn't matter. That made him ideal.

He was background. He was forgettable.

And in Dorr Vale, that made you disposable.

Aya hesitated. She reached into her satchel again and placed a folded cloth into his hand. The fabric was damp. Warm.

"I stole boiled water from the temple line," she said, lowering her gaze. "Use it on your hands. They're…"

She didn't finish the sentence. She didn't have to.

His fingers were red, cracked open at the creases. Dirt and dried blood had caked beneath the nails. The skin along his palms had split during yesterday's labor... carrying stone blocks for the northern yard's reconstruction. They hadn't wrapped his hands. No one did that for boys like him.

But she did. She always did. That was the problem. Aya still believed in saving people. In helping. In kindness.

She hadn't learned the lesson Dorr Vale taught too well: Kindness was not currency. It was a debt. And someone always came to collect.

The wind shifted. Somewhere, a bell tolled.

They both turned.

It was the seventh bell.

Three hours ahead of schedule.

Aya's hand gripped his sleeve. "Kai..."

He shook his head. Slowly. Calmly.

"I'm not running."

Her eyes widened. "You have to."

"No. Running makes them chase. Makes them laugh."

He stood, bones creaking like old timber. His legs were stiff, barely steady, but he moved anyway. He knew how this went.

They always came.

Tonight was no different.

---

The guards found him in the open street outside the bakery ruins. He didn't flinch when they approached. Didn't resist when they grabbed his collar and slammed him against the stone.

Their faces were blank. Well-fed. Their eyes dulled by repetition.

They dragged him through the winding roads of the quarter, the sounds of Dorr Vale washing over them like dirty water... cries from the pit fields, hammer clangs from the forges, the distant, hopeless lull of a worker's song.

Children watched from balconies. Old men pretended not to see.

And in the center of the city, towering like a corpse crucified in metal...

Stood the Punishment Wheel.

A relic of the mines. Once used to lower men into the abyss.

Now repurposed.

Obey, or be broken beneath it.

They tied Kai to its rusted frame with wire—the kind that digs past skin and finds bone. His arms were pulled back unnaturally, straining joints already inflamed. His shirt tore. Blood welled along old wounds.

No words.

No charges.

This was Dorr Vale's way.

They left him there.

And the city moved on.

---

People passed. They always did.

Some glanced, then away. Others paused just long enough to remind themselves that he wasn't theirs. That he wasn't their son. Their brother.

A woman whispered a prayer. A child tugged her sleeve, asking if he'd done something bad.

She didn't answer.

The sky bled crimson as dusk fell, and still no one came.

By nightfall, the square had emptied. The torches along the perimeter sputtered. Smoke curled in slow ribbons, stinging Kai's eyes.

His legs had gone numb.

His shoulders burned with a low, endless heat.

His fingers had stopped throbbing... now just swollen, stiff. He didn't cry. Not because he was brave. But because he couldn't afford to waste water.

He tilted his head back and stared at the sky.

The stars looked different tonight.

They didn't shimmer.

They didn't smile.

Just… watched.

Cold, detached witnesses.

It was between the blink of that starlight... between the instinct to scream and the resignation to stay silent... that something inside him shifted.

Not loud. Not sudden.

Just a closing of doors. A shuttering of self. His breath slowed. His muscles stopped trembling.

The cold, the burn, the sting... they stopped screaming.

He wasn't stronger.

But something inside him had stopped breaking. His body adjusted. Not to survive... but to accept.

Pain no longer sat on his skin. It lived in his bones now. Familiar. Integrated.

He didn't know what was happening. Not yet.

But something had begun. Something dangerous. Not an awakening of power. An awakening of clarity.

---

When the morning bell rang, and the guards came to release him, Kai stood without protest. Blood crusted the wire around his wrists. His skin hung loose, his limbs trembling... but his gaze was fixed. Empty, yet sharp.

He didn't speak. Didn't look at them. He just walked. They didn't stop him. Didn't even follow. Perhaps they sensed it, too. Something had changed.

---

Aya found him in the alley where they always met. She was holding two rice buns this time. One for now. One for later.

She dropped them both when she saw him.

"Kai..." Her breath caught. "Your wrists…"

He didn't respond.

He sat, slowly, the way someone might return to an old prayer –ritual, steady, precise.

She reached for him. He let her touch his hands.

But it wasn't the injuries that frightened her.

It was the look in his eyes.

No anger, No pain, Just focus.

"Kai?" she whispered, voice trembling.

He looked at her.

And for a moment, she saw someone she didn't recognize.

She would, in time.

She would come to understand that, this moment, this silence, this stillness was the birth of something the world would never recover from.

He wasn't stronger now.

He was just no longer breakable.

And that more than rage, more than vengeance, would shape the ghost the world would learn to fear.

The boy left behind in ash.

The Ash Ghost.